I enjoyed it alot, only issue is that there are some preditcable kind of cliche moments but it does work with the story well.
It had a good flow, and the art style works with the animation and voice overs. Well done
I feel like this was a good start, and it could have been 10 seconds long. Or an intro into a longer idea
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